You should add Mr. MDeBonis' username to your two works, he's an exceptional VA. Also I think you'll receive better scores, if you remind the audience what parts of the production are made by you... videos are a recent addition here, as all movie files were in Flash up till 2-3 years ago.
It also might help if you (if you'd like) to post these expansive collages as art here.
VicariousE
Just caught Beyond Teeth, very nice read and lines man! Just a question: did you make the visuals in your submission as well? Very decent script as well, have you been published?
Here's another word smith worthy of reading (if you don't mind the lack of paragraphs) http://nietzlawe.newgrounds.com/
entertheegg
Glad you enjoyed it! All credit to @MDeBonis for the voice acting. Yup, the video is a very long pan up a very tall collage i made. Took multiple photos and pieced them all together. Ha, nah i've not been published.
I'll check him out, cheers!